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Crimson Satisfaction by ~YamiNoTenchi:iconYamiNoTenchi:



Heart beat racing,
My eyes go dark
An inferno whithin me waiting...
waiting for the igniting spark

Voices chanting my name,
Taunting my decision
The consequences for my display
I could not envision

Snapping the tension,
my ties are unbound
The hairs on the back of my neck stand at attention
Time itself is slowing down

I lose control...
my hands tainted...
covered in the warm crimson satisfaction
©2005-2009 ~YamiNoTenchi
:iconyaminotenchi:

Author's Comments

This is something I've been working on all day today, I beleive it is inspired from a dream I had that made me relive some of my more violent experiences in middle school.

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:iconvapmiricvixen:
woah good but scary too... :hide:
:iconyaminotenchi:
heh heh thanx kit ^.^

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If I have to suffer any more, Mel Gibson is going to make a f%*#ing movie about me!!!
:iconroach164:
Violent Experiences in middle school?!? No way. You're too nice and calm to be violent.

I like the poem by the way. :D

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Tomorrow will come with out prayer.
The end will come with out hurrying.
I live only to be worthy of the corpse
I shall leave behind on that day...

I :heart: :sushi:
:iconyaminotenchi:
lol, well let's just say I have grown A LOT since then...

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If I have to suffer any more, Mel Gibson is going to make a f%*#ing movie about me!!!
:iconroach164:
Uh... Ok. :D

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Tomorrow will come with out prayer.
The end will come with out hurrying.
I live only to be worthy of the corpse
I shall leave behind on that day...

I :heart: :sushi:

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